What Love Really Is....
love is a powerful thing
love can be pain
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What is love? good poem, at 16 you are slowly starting to understand love... As you get older you will be blow away by the shift from how love makes you feel when someone you love shows you affection and care to how love make you feel when you give it and see the joy it manifests in your loved one's life. Great work.
is really good to me like a diamond of golden love please read it
LOVE - is a very powerful emotion that can move mountains like faith
Nice piece to share for a start, just keep on writing and reading to be able to learn how other poets penned their crafts so well. Always put your emotions to stir your readers right into the core of your works.
i think your poem is great..its very touching and it says alot in so many little words...this may be your first poem, but if you keep going at this rate...you would get better!
True said.....simple and touchy......10+