Thursday, July 30, 2015

What Love Did To Me... [response To R.K. Hart's Ph Poem 'My Love Flies'; Husbandhood; Very Short] Comments

Rating: 4.8

Love made this 'GIANT' a 'wimp'.
In lieu of running, now I limp.
Once again I'm JUST a little boy,
as my “Love” treats me....just like a toy!
...
Read full text

Bri Edwards
COMMENTS
Mj Lemon 10 August 2015

I really like this poem....There is something just so epic about it. It hints at a journey....Great poem. A 10.

0 0 Reply
Eugene Levich 07 August 2015

Join the club, Brisco!

0 0 Reply
Jak Black 01 August 2015

Ha ha! You're letting the side down Bri......... Women, the stronger of the sexes, Bri knows, he’s had three exes. Bri is trembling, he’s so afraid, ‘Cause number four must be obeyed.

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards

Earth, i believe
Close
Error Success