Thursday, December 27, 2012

What Life Teaches! Comments

Rating: 5.0

From life we learn many a valuable truth
But alas! Some dismiss it as mere froth

While life itself is a riddle
Remember, Death is an inexorable puzzle
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2018

An inspirational poem so nicely and touchingly inscribed. I quote...... Bury your past with all its woes As the New Year of hope brightly zooms! Thanks for sharing with 10

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Akhtar Jawad 17 March 2015

A great thoughtful poem. Throughout our life we learn something new.....................

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 17 January 2013

Valsa, this is great work of art with good wisdom being aired out. Thank you so much for posting this. Very inspirational indeed. Keep on posting your gems!

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Neetha Sasidharan 16 January 2013

hi malayaliiii, , , , , grt poem..wid a nice set of rhymes...kp penning....

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Valerie Dohren 31 December 2012

Many words of wisdom to carry us into the New Year. Very well penned. A very happy New Year to you Valsa, and keep up the good work! !

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Unwritten Soul 31 December 2012

Emulsion of life essence dropp and dissolved in a lesson to drink for learn...sweet as honey, bitter as herb we should take and it is a remedy for future...thanks for sharing, Happy New year and with greatest wishes..may you be blessed with happiness and smile! _Soul

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Lyn Paul 30 December 2012

You have covered everything, great work

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Pearls of wisdom at times spill on the floor of the house of reason and observation. The petals of your lines open up, teach and move on till it is bloomed into a poem of a fantastic format. You are at your best of didactic exuberance and philosophic grandeur here dear Madam. A gift poem for taking up a few new year resolutions for all! .

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Walterrean Salley 29 December 2012

Wonderful lessons profoundly stated. Very good job. And I hope you had a good Christmas Valsa.

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Jahan Zeb 29 December 2012

On Earth, forgiveness bonds hearts But revenge, sure, breaks all bonds May feel odd but reality dear. If jealousy is an acid which erodes Generosity is a fuel that reloads................. Wonderful I surrender. that way I'll have to copy and paste all your lines. Full of Maxims. Beautiful write. the message is sublime and The pattern magnificent. 10 out of ten

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 29 December 2012

Here froths the truth.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 28 December 2012

An exemplary poem for the New Year with priceless tips to light up our lives in glowing glitz! The whole poem teaches as to what life is and the manner to conduct oneself in this world. the content of the poetry with appropriate words and the beautiful style with complete rhyme and rhythm enchants the mind!

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Kee Thampi 28 December 2012

Not denigrate, denounce the fame of a gentle.... a poem on values... While Honesty leads him to salvation Deceit drives him to damnation

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 December 2012

the last two lines speak the ultimate truth! well done!

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