Sunday, February 12, 2012

What Left My Throat Dry? Comments

Rating: 4.2

Inexcusable crime
And incurable disease
Of the last century
Left my throat dry
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Abdul Wahab
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Md Mollick 28 February 2012

nice poem.I like it. it's so good.

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Md Mollick 28 February 2012

Very good poem. I like it.

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Harindhar Reddy 23 February 2012

Yippee! The poem starts, runs and ends in the philosophical ideas. I praise thee the poet, You have done a remarkable Job. You are promising poet with great future a head........ 10++++++++ Phenomenal work Wahabji!

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Pheko Motaung 19 February 2012

Your poem is a classic it deserves the honor! I dare not say more lest...

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Chettur Aishwarya Shrivastav 18 February 2012

now that's a masterpiece... thanks for sharing ur awesome work..

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Rishit Desai 16 February 2012

Very good. Whatever can be said has been said by Mr Harindhar Reddy and Ms Diane Hine.

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Shahzia Batool 16 February 2012

keats like picture of the the life n the world: for poetic merits its beautiful, but for content....these rhetorical qs...why so bleak n hopeless? ? ? here where men sit n hear each other groan where palsy shakes a few sad last gray hair where youth grows pale, n specter-thin n dies where but to think is to be full of sorrows n leaden-eyed despairs where Beauty cannot keep her lustrous eyes And new Love pine at them beyond tomorrow...

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Nurain Ali-balogun 15 February 2012

Brilliant piece. Thumbs up

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 February 2012

A fish in the water without a fin symbolism of inability, i like it Allah hafiz

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Ramesh Rai 14 February 2012

I agree with Mr. Haridharan.Reddy. i feel it a nice poem.

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Niki Nicholas Nkuna 13 February 2012

You are on the right track brother, the road you are walking on is brilliant. What a great poem!

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Harindhar Reddy 13 February 2012

A phenomenal poem well crafted by the craftsmen in you dear Wahbji, You words are strong and the emotion is once again sublime and you feelings are hobnobbing with sun. what else can more. I am surprised to read this poem, the you expressed is impaling in to my heart. Anyway I appreciate you vigorous approach in harking the truth.10+++++ rating to the poem. to the poet Hats off!

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 12 February 2012

the angel`s words while looking at our planet and all people... our mind.... What is the use to be dry, If I do not get the shadow and the fly? Spreading my wings to the sun Only to it, increases my debt burden. - really strong words..........

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Dave Walker 12 February 2012

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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