Inexcusable crime
And incurable disease
Of the last century
Left my throat dry
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Yippee! The poem starts, runs and ends in the philosophical ideas. I praise thee the poet, You have done a remarkable Job. You are promising poet with great future a head........ 10++++++++ Phenomenal work Wahabji!
Your poem is a classic it deserves the honor! I dare not say more lest...
now that's a masterpiece... thanks for sharing ur awesome work..
Very good. Whatever can be said has been said by Mr Harindhar Reddy and Ms Diane Hine.
keats like picture of the the life n the world: for poetic merits its beautiful, but for content....these rhetorical qs...why so bleak n hopeless? ? ? here where men sit n hear each other groan where palsy shakes a few sad last gray hair where youth grows pale, n specter-thin n dies where but to think is to be full of sorrows n leaden-eyed despairs where Beauty cannot keep her lustrous eyes And new Love pine at them beyond tomorrow...
A fish in the water without a fin symbolism of inability, i like it Allah hafiz
You are on the right track brother, the road you are walking on is brilliant. What a great poem!
A phenomenal poem well crafted by the craftsmen in you dear Wahbji, You words are strong and the emotion is once again sublime and you feelings are hobnobbing with sun. what else can more. I am surprised to read this poem, the you expressed is impaling in to my heart. Anyway I appreciate you vigorous approach in harking the truth.10+++++ rating to the poem. to the poet Hats off!
the angel`s words while looking at our planet and all people... our mind.... What is the use to be dry, If I do not get the shadow and the fly? Spreading my wings to the sun Only to it, increases my debt burden. - really strong words..........
nice poem.I like it. it's so good.