Wednesday, March 22, 2006

What It Is In Your Smile? Comments

Rating: 2.8

What it is in your smile?
That stopped my world from spinning
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Unknown Me...
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Mark Mendoza 26 March 2006

nice poem... keep it up... guess you're starting to find the magic once again to other. God Bless..

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***** ********* 23 March 2006

It sounds like the beginning of a beautiful friendship to me Unknown m, I really like this poem and it's flow, athough slightly jilting, seemed to be smoother with each read. Should that 'is' be there in the 1st line last verse? A favourite. 9 from Tai

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