What It Feels Like To Be Dead Comments

I agree, its deep. there is a typo for the second remain* the very first stanza is amazing, it stuck out to me instantly. i know that this is supposed to be dark and sad. but aiden, i dont see it... i mean its sad..but i dont want to start crying, for some reason, i am seeing happiness. this is a very good poem. and yes down there, he's an amazing poet!

deep... nice write... i'm a person whose interest is focused on what is positive and i always want to read poems, stories, and other texts with an happy ending. but this one is smooth and good if i will base it to the rules in poetry. you are a good poet.