Tuesday, August 30, 2011

What Is Wrong With You Comments

Rating: 4.5

Come on people,
Its time to open up your eyes now,
Look around you sunshine,
This world is wiked,
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Bethany Mujahed
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Stefanie Fontker 31 August 2011

I don't see this poem as negative, I see it as positive. This poem encourages people to open their eyes and see what the world has come to. This is beautiful.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 30 August 2011

Sometimes we see the world in horrible ways... It is the world past, present, and future. To change it first we must be willing to change ourselves. It is good poem though it also is a very negative poem. But thats reality.

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