What Is Wrong With Today's Lass And Lad? Comments

Nice to see such young mind and heart raising such questions. And very relevant ones. The poem seems not in agreement with some youth behaviour, but implies to the fact that there is some reason behind it which the elders fail to understand. Keep the good work up, young pen.

take all decisions in haste and then repent? they all still so do so I composed a poem MOTHERS DAY TODAY READ IT YOUNG GAL WILL UUUUUUUUUUUUU

(3) change the mistakes you accidentally made based upon readers responses and comments. The huge compliments will come themselves, dear Chandini! Bet! Gain a universal study, that´s one reality to possess as the basic of your poetical future. You have all capacities to become a great poetess. But never look down to other poets since you THINK you are better. Honesty is the best policy. Here I have spoken the truth, thank you!

(2) and us, parents and their kid-rebels, like in this poem you take the place of the parents attitude. Amazing! Keep creating young poetess, be diligent, accept and change all things that you realize are wrong and see and observe you will become a great poetess, truly great star, a great poetic star. You have innate talent in chosing the themes of your poem and the God-given heart to listen, the insight heart to correct and

(1) Dear young poetess, dear Chandini, on this age and you created such warm and heart warming poems. You are unique (I started around your age too creating poems for public reading) since your thoughts are mature for such an age! It´s constantly learning and changing, meanwhile you have written beautiful poems engaging life

An excellent poem about selfishness, but the adults have to set an example to young people and be firm to give young people guidance in a ruthless world!

This is a thoughtful poem on social behaviour of today's youth.Well done.Thanks for sharing.

such a thoughtful poem from a young and compassionate heart. Most people at your age think of their rights but not of their obligations. Congratulations for such an excellent poem. Keep writing!

By the way, excellent poetry too, congratulations.. You lifted my moral, good to see young people that still can think and have a heart, so rare today.

This is an extraordinary poem and spot on for today's youth. There is definitely something very wrong going on, selfishness, no respect just to name a couple. But adults too have no respect for each other either. It's a crumbling world in more ways than one... Hope that young people like yourself have the strength and positivity to put it back together again. I congratulate you on this poem Please, keep on writing.

The poem raises a few pertinent questions and queries to explore our societal mores and changing value systems. Thanks, Chandini, for the poem accompanied by notes.

Wow! Great poetry, Chandini Jaswal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Yeah; really today's lass and lad becomes mad; cause their study is truly realistic but out of conscience and etiquette........../// good poem penned