What is this that the thought of you makes me smile, like a child who gets a long desired present?
What is this that makes me twist your name over and over again in my head, whirling me among the clouds?
What is this that makes me speak to myself like a mystified believer in ecstasy?
What is this that has taken away my serenity in my sleep?
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Honest feelings of love from within an innocent's heart. Tears falling, for the reality of it's being is not realized by another. Beautiful and heartfelt poem, I loved it! 10++++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
True feelings in a natural but poetical way described.A real poem.
Marvellous composition using What is this? several times. Stunning expression having deep feelings. Enjoyable poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ....10
Hello to my good friend Leloudia. A more beautiful poem I have not read. It speaks of love, of longing, of romance and the twist on the ends, brings sadness into play. Nice work, Loyd
Well written. Beautiful, intellectual and lyric handling of the language.
Love hurts! ! ! When the right is not done. Thanks for sharing.