Tuesday, May 27, 2008

What Is This Comments

Rating: 4.5

I look at you,
And what is this feeling inside of me?
I am unsure,
This thing I am feeling, what could it be?
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Stephen Carey
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Greenwolfe 1962 28 May 2008

This is a much better topic and it is exploited well by the writer. The reader waits in anticipation. This is very good technique. At the end, it leaves the reader hanging in expectation. But the body of the poem revealed enough to satisfy. No extraordinary things exist here. That makes ten impossible but nine inevitable. GW62

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