Saturday, February 18, 2023

What Is The Sky Without Me? Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is the sky without me?
In daylight I shine so bright
Across the mountain and fields
I brought happiness and sadness
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Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele
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Top score, without doubt, dear poet.

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2. The poem, roughly translated says, "I lean on this Great Wall/ of the horizons/ and control the movement/ of this universe immense."

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Wonderful poem. " my going signal a daybreak"… This fascinating poem reminds me of the great poem "Sarga Sangeetam" by poet Vayalar (he wrote in Malayalam, my mother tongue) …

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Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele

Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele

Ilorin, Kwara State Nigeria
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