School is like a prison
We can't leave,
School is like an island
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you are totally wrong school is fun and it will help you to get into college. after you go to college you can get a job that you can in joy. so don't ruin your education by being stupid and this is coming from a 13 year old. Trust me life will be soooooooo much better when you get the job you want
ur poem is realy realy good it express all what i feel 4 skool, and wt most of us feel , gd written
Your lines are short and written in simple English that isn't monotonous to read...as to your opinion, it's relative: school was like that for me as a junior but in my senior years it was simply awesome...but anyone that's ever has a bad day at school can relate to what you wrote
you've stated clearly your school feeling nicely, but I disagree school on my perspective, protects, feeds you information that you are not forced to eat, basically school is what you make of it,
good similies, satisfactory description... i jjust don't agree with all these... school is what you want it to be....
good poem and use of similes yes but i can't agree and every thing you said there! ! ! ! !
I totally agree on that one! ! ! School is like HELL! ! ! ! I mean they could at least make school much more fun! ! ! ! Anyway like I said I TOTALLY agree on that one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Awesome job! ! ! ! !
How dare you say such things..!