Wednesday, December 17, 2008

What Is School Like? Comments

Rating: 3.6

School is like a prison
We can't leave,

School is like an island
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Jacob Gifford
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Your mom 26 January 2022

How dare you say such things..!

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Ja Pa 09 May 2013

you are totally wrong school is fun and it will help you to get into college. after you go to college you can get a job that you can in joy. so don't ruin your education by being stupid and this is coming from a 13 year old. Trust me life will be soooooooo much better when you get the job you want

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Naz Nen 28 June 2010

ur poem is realy realy good it express all what i feel 4 skool, and wt most of us feel , gd written

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Cleide Tatyana Almeida 01 June 2010

Your lines are short and written in simple English that isn't monotonous to read...as to your opinion, it's relative: school was like that for me as a junior but in my senior years it was simply awesome...but anyone that's ever has a bad day at school can relate to what you wrote

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Victoria Mbali 12 February 2010

you've stated clearly your school feeling nicely, but I disagree school on my perspective, protects, feeds you information that you are not forced to eat, basically school is what you make of it,

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Christian Navarro 30 August 2009

good similies, satisfactory description... i jjust don't agree with all these... school is what you want it to be....

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Chris W 27 April 2009

i totally agree I HATE school! ! ! ! Nice one

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Christina Smith 30 March 2009

good poem and use of similes yes but i can't agree and every thing you said there! ! ! ! !

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Stephanie Saba 13 March 2009

nice similie work. :) and I totally agree dude. haha

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Charlie Paino 09 March 2009

I totally agree on that one! ! ! School is like HELL! ! ! ! I mean they could at least make school much more fun! ! ! ! Anyway like I said I TOTALLY agree on that one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Awesome job! ! ! ! !

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Leah Bowden 25 January 2009

this poem is really good, well done (:

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Jelena Prica 18 December 2008

good job i like it two thumbs up for that how old r u

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Izik Alcox 17 December 2008

That's why I dropped out to play footbag! Interesting piece

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