Is it measured words
That are memorized
Forcefully said & dramatized;
Offered with pomp
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gurleen, the title and subject of this poem interested me, and i read and enjoyed this affirmation of what prayer is. -glen
Are words unmatched To the feelings inside? Whispered, in tears By a heart that is broken. That is prayer seek him in prayer. without a word, God will help us bear Our trials & troubles, sooooo true dear poetess. just fine reflection on prayer. We shall criticise such prayers as u described in the first stanza In temples and churches. Let us open our hearts, lift up our soul, bring all emotions of sorrow to God ………. That is prayer. Beautiful poem dear poetess. tony
The is no need at all for impressive prayer... True! God always looks at the heart. He is not interested in fancy words.
I am really indebted to you for appreciating all my poems.thank you so much.
It is a beautiful poem on prayer and God having intensive portrait based on spirituality. I appreciate this poem. Many thanks dear Gurleen, keep the ball rolling...10
Thank you, Mr.Kumarmani, I am really glad you appreciate all my poems! Your comments will always be treasured.
a wonderful poem that shows the way to say in a spiritual way thank god for just being there? .........well written
An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth with spiritual insight. The essence of prayer is aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Gurleen.
Thanks for the appreciation.I am really indebted to you for giving me a feedback about my poem!
No, prayer is so often Just words unspoken Whispered, in tears By a heart that is broken.great poem shaired dear poet.i enjoy this poem....10++++