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Friday, November 28, 2008

What Is Poetry Comments

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I stare at this blank screen,
Trying to find lost words,
Lost words that will put themselves together,
And sound like poetry,
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Michael Pruchnicki 28 November 2008

What does poetry sound like? Does rhymimg make words flow better? Or at all? What's the point of a 'bigger image'? Is tha singular poet a plural they? Why? Why have tears 'dropped'? What has 'sadness filled'? And what do you see between the lines? Does your effort make any sense at all? Where?

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Joseph Poewhit 28 November 2008

Time to kickback and wait for a thought

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