What Is My Sickness? (Part 1) Comments

I wrote, A friend is sick and here you are. Your verses are great and feelings are tensed. I like it. I will rate it 10.

I thank you all for your support. Poetry comes when it comes (and so does sickness) . I assume it will pass before I do.

Being sick is no fun, I know, especially when you don't know what's wrong with you. Follow Kelly's advice.

Take care of yourself spock. Rest, fluids and poetry. : -)

dont know what i hve, ......... salt. salt eater. i lack salt... virus...... so many things come in this great poem. first i thought it is satirical..... doctors, their inability to diagnose....... thank you very much. dear poet. tony