What is love, is it only a word?
A meaningless saying that everyone's heard?
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last 2 lines could read read or, is love my heart that's not yet torn apart GREAT POEM really... good rhyme and visuals... just an idea for the end because you are using couplets - you should stay with that form throughout the whole poem.
like the metaphors: and whatever anyone else says, i like the ending as it is. it ties all the other couplets together. its wonderful, don't change it!