Thursday, October 13, 2016

What Is Love? Comments

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When you fall in love
its a beautiful trap,
an endless gap
that has no map.
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Ahmed Shibli
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Chinedu Dike 14 October 2016

Beautiful depiction of love as a spiritual experience and voyage of pure bliss, that is whimsical and temperamental. Love appears unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not properly nurtured at all times to maintain its bliss. An insightful poem well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ahmed. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Ahmed Shibli 14 October 2016

sure! ! appreciate the appreciation! !

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Nosheen Irfan 13 October 2016

Well-penned. A beautiful elaboration on love.

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Ahmed Shibli 14 October 2016

Thank you

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