A longing
To be
one with the other
More than
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“I want to have my own way for longevity” means.. its called self esteeming..well done and perfectly written... short but long with hidden perceptions...10+++++++++
dis fine poetic eloquence reveal that Titlee is a philosopher! Love and life, two different side of a coin this is a symbolic world, we live to join. 10000+
Anjali, Very impressive, nicely constructed. Keep going more on this. A request Can i ask you to rite with easy words and express. This will have a greater impact on the people and it will also explain they way which u wanted to share. Cheers, aji
i wish i knew as much about love as u do. Bittersweet and well written
You speak the language of love very vividly in all of your poems. I think you understand its many definations very well.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra
Love is sensational and paramount desire to possess and to be posessed.Great pen you got there baby! !
DEAR ANJALI, IT'S A TOPIC WHERE INEXPERINCED CAN BETTER COMMENT THAN THE EXPERIENCED. BECAUSE THEY ARE STILL IN DREAMS. BUT WITHOUT GOING INTO MUCH DETAILS YOU HAVE HANDLED AN ISSUE WITH POIGNANT WORDS, GOOD IMAGERY AND LEFT CERTAIN THINGS TO IMAGINATION OF THE READERS. A GOOD WRITE.DESERVES A-10-FROM ME -RAJKUMAR N.B. for other two poems see my personal message
What is Love...what a hard question your delightful poem describes one answer and provokes the mind to exercise...food for thought...magic as usual++++10 regards uavareallyreallynice1
This is not just romantic, it's very thought provoking.... very well written.
Dear Poet, Love is love. Good & bad test every earthly things do have, but once a test is not denied, being human nature. As similar is the test of love.
yes hard to say no, well done dear poet i really enjoye reading it, thanks for sharing
a small love in its granule in its coldest form Who did it first And how did it happen? Was it the chicken Or was it the egg? A sweetest sin, The darkest chocolate Have it once And want it Again and again Hard to say no So hard to repent.
its like a whiff of fresh air.....a new way of lookin at love....an unforgettable poem..! !
Very true infdeed.. 'When you feel all alone And the world has turned its back on you Give me a moment please to tame your wild wild heart I know you feel like the walls are closing in on you Its hard to find relief and people can be so cold When darkness is upon your door and you feel like you cant take anymore Let me be the one you call If you jump Ill break your fall Lift you up and fly away with you into the night If you need to fall apart I can mend a broken heart If you need to crash then crash and burn Youre not alone'(Savage Garden) love can tame wild heart hearts..if you found a tiger turn him into a pomeranien..a lion in to a loving doberman..a monkey in to loving pet..n if the quaterback or the yuraj fall far you...show him da knid of love that he ll never think abt preity zinta10+++
well and simple expressed abt love...... really a genius can do this in this way. keep writing like this thanks another 10+++++
a beautiful definition what is the love...loely warm poem