A longing
To be
one with the other
More than
that outward pleasure
A passion to discover
That hidden treasure
A hide and seek game like
Pleasantly was ever invented
Who did it first
And how did it happen?
Was it the chicken
Or was it the egg?
A sweetest sin,
The darkest chocolate
Have it once
And want it
Again and again
Hard to say no
So hard to repent.
One little combat
Sometimes more fearful
Than soldiers in war.
Enough for our lawyer
To earn his bread and butter
Maybe a lifetime
For him and his family
To build a treasure on
Others mountains of woe
Or infidelity
So then,
What is love?
Nature will say
“I want to have
my own way
for longevity”
Her way
To replace
One with the other,
To make room for another
ANJALI
01-05-2009
P.S: (Dr. Hitesh's poem Bullets of Sorrow set me thinking hence
I penned down this poem)
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i wish i knew as much about love as u do. Bittersweet and well written
You speak the language of love very vividly in all of your poems. I think you understand its many definations very well.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra
Love is sensational and paramount desire to possess and to be posessed.Great pen you got there baby! !
DEAR ANJALI, IT'S A TOPIC WHERE INEXPERINCED CAN BETTER COMMENT THAN THE EXPERIENCED. BECAUSE THEY ARE STILL IN DREAMS. BUT WITHOUT GOING INTO MUCH DETAILS YOU HAVE HANDLED AN ISSUE WITH POIGNANT WORDS, GOOD IMAGERY AND LEFT CERTAIN THINGS TO IMAGINATION OF THE READERS. A GOOD WRITE.DESERVES A-10-FROM ME -RAJKUMAR N.B. for other two poems see my personal message
a beautiful definition what is the love...loely warm poem
“I want to have my own way for longevity” means.. its called self esteeming..well done and perfectly written... short but long with hidden perceptions...10+++++++++
dis fine poetic eloquence reveal that Titlee is a philosopher! Love and life, two different side of a coin this is a symbolic world, we live to join. 10000+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Anjali, Very impressive, nicely constructed. Keep going more on this. A request Can i ask you to rite with easy words and express. This will have a greater impact on the people and it will also explain they way which u wanted to share. Cheers, aji