Saturday, December 27, 2008

What Is Love? Comments

Rating: 5.0

There once was a child, who was mistreated,
She was taken by the state, and her mom was defeated in court.
She went to live with a loving family, where she felt needed,
And one day she asked 'What is love? '
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Rita Hawkins
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J. P. Dullahan 28 March 2009

A very moving poem - almost like a parable - about how much we all need to feel loved by those closest to us. A beautiful story - 10.

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Mimi Fakhira 03 January 2009

The little girl found love and happiness at last. Beautiful ending, Rita. Thanks for sharing!

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Rita Hawkins

Louisville, kentucky
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