Sunday, April 20, 2014

What Is Life Comments

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A friend once asked,
What is life?
My lovely friend,
Your belief is your life,
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Khalida Bano Ali 18 October 2016

A very thoughtful poem............................................

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Khalid Saifullah 04 March 2015

What a philosophic poem.....................10

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Khalid Saifullah 04 March 2015

What a philosophic poem.....................10

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Khairul Ahsan 29 April 2014

It's a beautiful poem. I liked the three primary colors of a pure soul that you described. 'And if your soul is beautified, You will see a rainbow, in the final moments.' - Hope to see a beautiful rainbow in the final moments. These lines are a befitting end to a beautiful discourse.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 28 April 2014

Hello friend, Its an adage type of poem. I like it, Thinking To belief To life. Excellent way to teach. Why we should not think about death that is also clear hear. The three primary colors are, Faith and love and sacrifice. These colors make all other pretty colors, So lovely so nice so beautiful indeed, And if your soul is beautified, You will see a rainbow, in the final moments. Really an excellent thought. May be philosophical but a beautiful poem. Ruma |

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Ruma Chaudhuri 28 April 2014

Hello friend, Its an adage type of poem. I like it, Thinking To belief To life. Excellent way to teach. Why we should not think about death that is also clear hear. The three primary colors are, Faith and love and sacrifice. These colors make all other pretty colors, So lovely so nice so beautiful indeed, And if your soul is beautified, You will see a rainbow, in the final moments. Really an excellent thought. May be philosophical but a beautiful poem. Ruma |

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