What Is Life? Comments

Life is everything between birth and death. Am in love with ur poems! !

Good one! You have a lot of potential- keep writing! !

no, no, no....this is not a good poem. stop trying so hard to rhyme! focus more on putting your thoughts on paper and really describing how YOU feel. Tell a story with your words or paint a vivid picture of a moment that took place in your life or sharply describe a feeling that you felt....don't just ramble and rhyme...that isn't poetry.

no, no, no....this is not a good poem. stop trying so hard to rhyme! focus more on putting your thoughts on paper and really describing how YOU feel. Tell a story with your words or paint a vivid picture of a moment that took place in your life or sharply describe a feeling that you felt....don't just ramble and rhyme...that isn't poetry.

i luv ds...i rily do...thumbs up!

Exemplary! Write on and you have the knack, Good luck to the rare poetess-bud!

First about soul and now about life..good You are beehive of beautiful poetry Shed a few more drops of honey Queen Bee! -KAVIN CHARALAN

LIFE-Live In Freely Everywhere/ A good poem! ! ! ! !

Already I have typed my comments. But it doesn't appear. So I repeat my comments briefly. You are a matured writer. Five and four lined stanzas with rhyming words succeedingly or alternately at the end of lines show your plan of writing. You use idioms as well. Nice expression in sweet language. Before reading your poems, I have given you a paragraph of advice as it is a habit for me having been a teacher for a long time. Excellent Poet you are! 100%.

O you, the poet matured in an immatured age! Rhyming lines in four and five lined stanzas. Jovial humour gleams here and there. Idiomatic meaning of some words sparkle! Good English at 17 years! Your parents are fortunate to have you as their daughter. Having been a teacher for more than 30 years, I am tempted to give the top scores. Cheers!

well done. I loved it.

well done. keep going

really nice.. i like it

A really great poem with a beautiful flow.

I liked this poem very much; keep writing! ! !

One must know how to liveA line as is the rest of this poem! Congratulations.You show maturity and an understanding of life way above your years.Keep writing poetry.You're one for the future.And keep the flag flying.For India.For thyself.For humanity.

Nice philosophical poem. I really like it.