Wednesday, June 17, 2009

* What Is Life? * Comments

Rating: 4.9

Aggress legitimately
I can hear screams from the back of the barns
"somebody help, someone help, call 911,
my daughter is bleeding".
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Bushra Hussaini 07 November 2009

that one of the great poem, so complete, well expresion of wild dark emotions! !

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Bong Francisco 08 August 2009

When life begins.................................................

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Obed Souza 15 July 2009

Each person portrays life their own way. This answers depends on what one can see and read between the lines of this mysterious text called ' life', a tragedy or a love poem...

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Kristina B; Williams 11 July 2009

4=s 10 yet again....love reading your poems..no favor at all

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A Lifetime Of Fame 05 July 2009

OMG. This is like, one of the best poems I've read in many years. Please keep writing more poems like that. GOD bless you.

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 05 July 2009

Dear Sulaiman, Have you returned to Singapore? I'm still in Singapore, enjoying my stay here. About your poem Its a neat projection of hollwness and desperation of present day life all around the world.The helplessness of the mankind on the backdropp of threats faced by us in rveryday life from unpredictable sources.Good write. Good rating A-9--Rajkumar N.B.-I've posted 3/4 poems from Singapore.Spare some time to read, rate and comment.-Rajkumar

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Linda Moore 01 July 2009

You are a very talented and expressive writer, all things twofold.......10

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Mamta Agarwal 01 July 2009

Sulaiman, this is one of your poems which brings out hollowness, desperation, meaninglessness of earthly existence, as seen in present context. yes, we don't know whether our loved one are coming back from school or work. there are tragedies taking place all the time. no wonder you ask what is life, as million others, including me. 10 Mamta

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Jester's P 30 June 2009

the question 'what is life? ' strikes me deeply. this past months i was really troubled- something from the past that hunts me till this very moment...but what is life after all if there is no good things to happen and bad things to happen all the same. the question is between our head and our heart - the truth why 'man' cannot forget his past and cannot fear what might be in the futore or cannot perfect his now. the poem reminds of my fear to be alone yet not realizing i am always alone...he he he funny isn't it. thanks

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Dr. Sonal Chhaya 28 June 2009

Excellently expressed...... What is Life? ...... A Comedy of Errors....

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Tim Honeycutt 26 June 2009

very deep and well wrote, keep up the good work

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Dear Suleiman, a great poem, so much of life oozing out of it.

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Fey Shane 25 June 2009

deep, magnificently written, thought-provoking. There aren't words for it. Thank you.

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Laila lili 24 June 2009

WORDS are not enough well it is very beautiful and it must be expenssive piece icant express about my feeling realy it makes me silent just simply i realy liked it 10+++++ keep on your writing

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a most beautiful craft! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Wispe Decoteau 23 June 2009

cool piece really had me going from begin to end. very beautiful.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

good piece..a little long but beautifuuly constructed.8.5

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Mel Atie 22 June 2009

yeah... that is life... i enjoy read this poem...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 June 2009

From: Nelson Michael (India ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 6/22/2009 5: 38: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Hello 'what is life' Well you are the first poet to reach out to me... So I am wondering why? Thanks I read your poem.. It really got me thinking.. Your thoughts are so deep... Great job

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Wonderful poem that makes you think. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.

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