Aggress legitimately
I can hear screams from the back of the barns
"somebody help, someone help, call 911,
my daughter is bleeding".
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When life begins.................................................
Each person portrays life their own way. This answers depends on what one can see and read between the lines of this mysterious text called ' life', a tragedy or a love poem...
4=s 10 yet again....love reading your poems..no favor at all
OMG. This is like, one of the best poems I've read in many years. Please keep writing more poems like that. GOD bless you.
Dear Sulaiman, Have you returned to Singapore? I'm still in Singapore, enjoying my stay here. About your poem Its a neat projection of hollwness and desperation of present day life all around the world.The helplessness of the mankind on the backdropp of threats faced by us in rveryday life from unpredictable sources.Good write. Good rating A-9--Rajkumar N.B.-I've posted 3/4 poems from Singapore.Spare some time to read, rate and comment.-Rajkumar
You are a very talented and expressive writer, all things twofold.......10
Sulaiman, this is one of your poems which brings out hollowness, desperation, meaninglessness of earthly existence, as seen in present context. yes, we don't know whether our loved one are coming back from school or work. there are tragedies taking place all the time. no wonder you ask what is life, as million others, including me. 10 Mamta
the question 'what is life? ' strikes me deeply. this past months i was really troubled- something from the past that hunts me till this very moment...but what is life after all if there is no good things to happen and bad things to happen all the same. the question is between our head and our heart - the truth why 'man' cannot forget his past and cannot fear what might be in the futore or cannot perfect his now. the poem reminds of my fear to be alone yet not realizing i am always alone...he he he funny isn't it. thanks
Excellently expressed...... What is Life? ...... A Comedy of Errors....
Dear Suleiman, a great poem, so much of life oozing out of it.
deep, magnificently written, thought-provoking. There aren't words for it. Thank you.
WORDS are not enough well it is very beautiful and it must be expenssive piece icant express about my feeling realy it makes me silent just simply i realy liked it 10+++++ keep on your writing
cool piece really had me going from begin to end. very beautiful.
From: Nelson Michael (India ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 6/22/2009 5: 38: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Hello 'what is life' Well you are the first poet to reach out to me... So I am wondering why? Thanks I read your poem.. It really got me thinking.. Your thoughts are so deep... Great job
Wonderful poem that makes you think. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.
that one of the great poem, so complete, well expresion of wild dark emotions! !