I used to be a good man
But I failed, disappointed and I’m being alone
I used to do the best I could
But now I'm bored and tired and I being alone
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Yasser well done, to strip the deciet of the many, but I don't recommend joining them, rather your poem is the protest 10
you have no illusions and truly life is often diappointing, have faith things will improve, well done cheers Shimon
I love the last lines- 'They have no rules They have no truth' Very nice.10+
I liked the wonderment in this poem it was full of truth experssions about the life we live in.. lie is an easy word nowadays... and I think loneliness is better than the friends that they are hard to be found.. in my opinion it's a very good poem.. but still we have to remember life goes on as it never ends.. so why don't we forget our pain and keep going on....! ! ! ! (WONDERFUL) Diana Halabi
The Truth is in the eye of the beholder.Live as if every second of your life is important.For every bad thing there is something good.Nothing is hopeless.And I know what loneliness is you just have to find yourself.Peace...
it's so great, but i want you to belevie in the truth and i want you to go on :)
...'Believe in lie and lie the truth'... good line...poetic enigmatic...good piece...thanks for sharing, Yasser...10