Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, January 19, 2010

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What is it to me if world does not care?
What I do and go from where to where?
Is it necessary to run for everybody’s wish?
Will it be good to deplete pond from fishes?
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Darshna Chopra 06 September 2010

What is it to me if world does not care? What I do and go from where to where? Is it necessary to run for everybody’s wish? Will it be good to deplete pond from fishes?

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Pratheek Praveen Kumar 15 February 2010

'Life is full circle journey to be carried on With half hearted attempt no battle can be won' -- 'What is it to me'. Very poetic and pregnant with insight. . I read your all 459 poems and enjoyed them all, but ones like 'What is it to me' stand out for their wonderful expressions. Also appreciated your charming expressions deep from heart in 'Sister-in-law'. Truly revealing and enjoyable. Let god give you good luck with your sisters-in-law. Good luck. -- PRATHEEK PRAVEEN KUMAR

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Yacov Mitchenko 19 January 2010

Actually, I enjoyed this poem more than most of your others. It is clearer, more focused, and the development of ideas is smoother. There's improvement in grammar and syntax. Yes, we need to walk alone and leave this earth a little more beautiful than it was without us. We need to proceed with the utmost passion and dedication, regardless of how well our efforts are received by others. Generally, the nobler the cause, the more ill will and resentment the individual provokes, often due to envy or to people's feeling threatened in some way. Thank you, sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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