What Is It That You Think? Comments

So the poet is in love...interesting :)

A nice poetic imagination, Avinash. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Something we can usually really relate to which is in my idea always something that catches the attention of a reader but if the reader is in love with poetry such as myself they luckily look deeper than that :) , in fact I could feel frustration and a bit of ' sour ' here, nice build up too, honestly not so easily written, tried this many times but no: -) , you succeeded very well here, kind regards, V.