Wednesday, February 13, 2008

What Is Death Means To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is it like when I’ve died?
Just died and nothing would come
No more prides
No more crimes
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
COMMENTS
Marcella D 10 July 2009

sounds like a good poem and you have a good point there about death

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Marcellus Watts 17 June 2009

I love this one, a dark creepy, quite, unknown atmosphere in the poem thats what i love about it.: -)

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Naidz Ladia 29 December 2008

hahahahhaha...whatta poem, , , strong infrmation that u r still living and everybody should be careful coz ull be going up and ready to be on top....THATS WHAT I LIKE FROM YOU HON.... DONT QUIT, , , aa i know ull not.... ALWAYS SOAR HIGH, , as high as the sky...i like ths nformation WHCH s written in lines....i like ths, , I REALLY LIKE THE WAY U SHOW UR BRAVERY TOWARDS COMPETETORS..... the last line.....'bet it', , , , , WHATTA WORD....my gosh...as if i dont want to stop typing wrds for ths poem...oh my gosh...

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Linda Weischedel 21 August 2008

Wildly intense poem!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 August 2008

Yet we dread the death. good

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Mamta Agarwal 22 July 2008

death is not the end, you bet- well written

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Gregory Collins 21 July 2008

time is long and loud until the last beat of your heart

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Tami Gee 13 March 2008

Wonderful death poem.

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