What is it like when I’ve died?
Just died and nothing would come
No more prides
No more crimes
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I love this one, a dark creepy, quite, unknown atmosphere in the poem thats what i love about it.: -)
hahahahhaha...whatta poem, , , strong infrmation that u r still living and everybody should be careful coz ull be going up and ready to be on top....THATS WHAT I LIKE FROM YOU HON.... DONT QUIT, , , aa i know ull not.... ALWAYS SOAR HIGH, , as high as the sky...i like ths nformation WHCH s written in lines....i like ths, , I REALLY LIKE THE WAY U SHOW UR BRAVERY TOWARDS COMPETETORS..... the last line.....'bet it', , , , , WHATTA WORD....my gosh...as if i dont want to stop typing wrds for ths poem...oh my gosh...
sounds like a good poem and you have a good point there about death