Tuesday, April 21, 2009

What Is Death? Comments

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ANOTHER STEP:
-How do we view birth?
As the beginning
-What is school like?
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Elizabeth Middleton
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SAM Mitsuki 27 April 2009

How can we view death. Death is something we cant really expirience due to dieing you cant run back to your friends and say 'Hey I know what death is! ' It doesnt work like that....Maybe we are all, all ready dead in a sense? Death is hard to nail but i like the way you used it in this poem.

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Tyler Smith 21 April 2009

Nice, Liz. Death is such a hard topic to nail, but nail it you did. I loved the ending, and you should definitely be proud of this. Amazing poem!

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Christina Smith 21 April 2009

I guess you can't view death it's one of those things, no-one knows where they are going intil they actually get there! ! ! Heavern of Hell (well that's my opinion because I'm a Catholic) ! ! Thank you 4 that xx

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Britney Hogue 21 April 2009

Many view death as an unpleasant afair that will happen no matter what. I see it like you do. As a new step in life. A new chapter in our book. An opening door to what awaits in the next life if that is so. Lovely poem. Britney

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