the big question...
what is death?
is it pain?
or is it a loss?
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Yes death is a huge pain! ! If you want you could read my poem 'death' which is talking about the same issue...Merna
Perhaps death is new beginning or may be endless and peaceful sleep, who knows.......a good write.........
This is like the poem i wanted to read today...after having experienced a near death situation......yesterday....... good one........liked it.......
i like the idea behind it. not bad at all. the 10x in the poem didn't quite help, and u sometimes gotta check for spelling mistakes. great start tho, urge you to continue writing. u only get better each time u write
hmmm...a mystery id say....loved it! !