Friday, July 17, 2009

What Is Death? Comments

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the big question...
what is death?
is it pain?
or is it a loss?
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ashley fulford
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Iron Panda 23™ 16 February 2010

hmmm...a mystery id say....loved it! !

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Merna Ibrahim 16 October 2009

Yes death is a huge pain! ! If you want you could read my poem 'death' which is talking about the same issue...Merna

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* Stephen *king 24 September 2009

Perhaps death is new beginning or may be endless and peaceful sleep, who knows.......a good write.........

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Shekhar Joshi 23 September 2009

This is like the poem i wanted to read today...after having experienced a near death situation......yesterday....... good one........liked it.......

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Ronald Doku 18 July 2009

i like the idea behind it. not bad at all. the 10x in the poem didn't quite help, and u sometimes gotta check for spelling mistakes. great start tho, urge you to continue writing. u only get better each time u write

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somewhere i dont want to be
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