What Is Blue? Comments

I LIKE THE POEM. THE POEM IS VERY INDERSTING FOR RIED

Thanks Adeline, I wrote this poem kinda quickly and mispelled a few words. I will read yours too. Thanks again.

A lovely effort. May I suggest line seven could start with Where instead of 'With', and in line nine I think you meant petals instead of 'pedals'. Read mine - I Worry Too - Adeline