Sunday, September 24, 2006

What Is Beautiful Comments

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What is beautiful?
Children playing together not concerned with the color of their skin
Watching a child’s creativity in playing with an imaginary friend
Every child that we see playing happily and smiling
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David Hall
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Alison Cassidy 25 September 2006

David, This is a great idea for a poem and the images you have given the reader are appealing. Perhaps you could simplify some of your sentences, to make the work flow so that is reads less like prose. Nonetheless, you have communicated your feelings very well. Warmly, Alison

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Prasanna Kumari 24 September 2006

finding beauty in all ordinary thing is beautiful.presenting things with added beauty is poets' duty, i think.

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David Hall

David Hall

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