What is beautiful?
Children playing together not concerned with the color of their skin
Watching a child’s creativity in playing with an imaginary friend
Every child that we see playing happily and smiling
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finding beauty in all ordinary thing is beautiful.presenting things with added beauty is poets' duty, i think.
David, This is a great idea for a poem and the images you have given the reader are appealing. Perhaps you could simplify some of your sentences, to make the work flow so that is reads less like prose. Nonetheless, you have communicated your feelings very well. Warmly, Alison