Monday, February 10, 2014

What Is All About It? Comments

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When I see a very poor boy, starving, tears in his eyes, I gave him some food, that serene moments were make me feel like 'todopoderoso', to raise his being, to raise his soul.
What is all about it?

When I give flowers to my beloved..
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Utsav Patel
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Payal Parande 07 July 2014

wow random stuff is it well i find it excellent stuff and this time you reach to the point where perfection stays, must say you did a wonderful job you were able to keep the expression profound and deep yet with so easiness, just bravo

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Tanya Gupta 01 March 2014

very nicely written poem with beautifull thoughts come and read my poems also and leave your comments...

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Shraddha The Poetess 25 February 2014

fantastic...bhaiyaaaa.. a wonderful poem.....with wonderful thoughts.............. thnx for sharingg..............

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Bharti Chandwani 10 February 2014

exellent.....rich vocab and good thougts prevades the whole work.....keep writing...

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Utsav Patel

Utsav Patel

Surat, Gujarat, India
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