Saturday, August 18, 2012

What Is A Chance? Comments

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Eager to run and jump
Like water on the plant
However, on account of the wind
Falling into near stream!
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Eindaray Kyaw
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Mark Dillon 30 August 2012

very well written, you shine through your words, you took a chance to show yourself to the world through your writing, you have a gift. well done.

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 28 August 2012

Nice poem. i liked the allusion to nature in each stanza connected to a human value like honesty later... :)

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Aung Si 21 August 2012

I take pity on you.In the wild world, it is nature.But in the long run, I believe that honesty is essential.Where is honesty? Honesty is within your soul.Don't find out in others.Just my advice!

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