What If? (Sad) Comments

A very pensive and sombre work expressing great unease and anxiety in a world that seems to be rapidly falling apart, the great part is the contradiction between your first line and the second creating a sence of pessimism in which all actions seemed eternally doomed. It’s a great work, but I feel that if the sky was blue, you would be eternally thinking about the grey that is hidden. Try to Steal a rainbow from the dark

Poetry like this will always live on in the harts of the understanding.What if this poem will not be noticed? Chances are there are many understanding people out there, so good job, poem, and write

Good poem and good use of allegory. People are made to endure any hardship that comes in their lives. If any of this would happen, I would just tell myself be patient and soon everything will come to pass :)) Thank you for sharing