Tuesday, May 5, 2009

What If I Told You... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wanted to tell you
That you are my only boo
I wanted you to know that I once dreamed of you
That you are my everyday wish
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Kurt Behle
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Just such sensitive work Kurt. Telling someone you love them when you are in love can make you vulnerable, and frightened of rejection, but it is something that can be shouted out to the world as the feeling is so unbelievable.! You have expressed yourself wonderfully and I think it is great! 10 Karin Anderson

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Nangula Immanuel 08 May 2009

aww! That is so sweet. Very well written as well, i like! !

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Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

good expressive write...emotions filled...love is funny ball game...often scores sameside... good work, Kurt...10

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Naidz Ladia 07 May 2009

great expressions from your heart...what if i told you? ...a very nice piece with question and an answer..very nice..naizz

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Dakotas Angel 05 May 2009

I really like that and i can relate to it easily keep it up its very fine work

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Mohau Patric Maine 05 May 2009

u r the great poet in making, never loose that enthusiasm bruu

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Eyan Desir 05 May 2009

Very nice good write

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