Sunday, November 23, 2008

What If I Died And You Were Not Here? Comments

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What if I died and you were not here
If you were far, far away
And I died while you were gone.
Would you hear of it soon?
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Sophia White
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Sophia W. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 February 2014

This is a beautiful poem! And it touched me. It deserves 10/10. The title is eye catching. The first and the last two lines bracket the complete poem beautifully! Well done!

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that was a deep thought. It makes me think, I enjoyed how your words played with my mind.

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