Saturday, October 18, 2014

What If I Can Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

you can't tolerate
the truth
behind the words
'I can fly'
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Spellshifter Poetry
fly
COMMENTS
Karen Sinclair 24 October 2014

Another beautiful write. This threw me as the last poem I reviewed was portraying life's end and here (to me) is the positivity of youth contrasting with the other character who is jade. I love it when I stumble on a new writer that I appreciate. Tyvm Ps I used to dream I could fly. That dream disappeared. I miss it

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