What If, I Am On My Death Bed? Comments

Reading through the designs of Nature that can't be stumbled by us Humans..sure your following Questions in Stanzas.. 'raised question in one subconscious, Shadow of time, where time doesn't exist, Forest isn't scattered with dark clouds alone, , a perception designed by this chaotic world, What if, I am on my death bed? , is right but we ALL have to be on that bed some day! ! Yes 10!

Dancing with thoughts, which song may suit the most Wandering gardens, which flower may smell like a lover, Visiting harbors, which ship carries literal wisdom, ............Feeling fo Gratitude............. you highlight at the end gratitude. very fine thoughts and images...... i think this is ur best poem....... love to read you...... thank you dear poet. tony