What If I Am A Girl? Comments

Very well written 👌👌👌

Hi Pooja, Very beautiful poem. An exhortation to all women, to be bold and self-reliant. I can also work day and night, Repay back the person who troubles me slight. Pride follows people's ride, They think that a girl's life is not so wide... and, A girl can also fight, A girl can also shout, A girl is also strong, That she can fight the wrong. As proud father my daughter, I fully endorse your views, words.. Great write! ! Your poem is quite long, vociferous, just shows how is the entire idea to your heart. Your write here is quite passionate... You as a girl take your first step, To build such a nest. Leave behind the rest, You start your protest... I find repetition of ideas here and there, which you'd have ignored because of your passion for the subject. But, please remember, brevity is the most desirable quality of poetry.. Very nice poem. I love it. A fullest 10++ plus entry in mypoemslist.. I can also work day and night, Repay back the person who troubles me slight. Pride follows people's ride, They think that a girl's life is not so wide...

stand up for the girls... well written

inspiring write..a good work done there and here