Sunday, May 21, 2006

What If? - Fun Comments

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What if the sun forgot to shine?
Where would we be in the dark decline?
And what if the birds forgot to fly?
Would we be eating blackbird pie?
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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson
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Duncan Wyllie 28 June 2006

I felt wide awake for this one, no snoring REALLY! The what if's of life, UMMMM gets me thinking What if you had no talent! No, I really can't imagine that Love Duncan X

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Geoff Warden 21 May 2006

excelent write Lisa it is amazing the poems that can come too your head when you least expect it keep them coming

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Tracey Collins 21 May 2006

well writen, keep up the good writing.

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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