Wednesday, May 27, 2009

******what If? ? Comments

Rating: 3.1

Think...! If the time stop suddenly?
And still you are in state of hurry? ?

Life gives only one chance to be happy
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Ashleymarie love 03 June 2009

this is a pome that i would love to wake up to and read every morning to remind me that Everyday it will get better Ashleymarie

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Saadat Tahir 31 May 2009

a cute sweet and suggary piece...the sort one pens in youthful confidence, , , very nice and loveable you did a nice poem tara... keep penning my ten to it cheers

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James Mclain 28 May 2009

a beautiful quite desperation in a smile thats always there no matter the cost to the self while laying in the heart of another..iip

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

Very nice short poem. Both the starting and the ending of the poem is lovely. 10++

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