Thursday, May 10, 2007

What If? Comments

Rating: 4.8

What if I will never see you again?
If the future is fog and rain
What if we lost all we have today?
If our lives were to go astray
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Paul Karanja 02 December 2016

Nicely woven. I love the What if...? question.

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rajagopal haran 05 November 2007

it is all but he; great poem; rhythmic words with contents

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Mary Das 12 May 2007

So much of hopes in it. May things work out well. All the best.

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Marvin Brato 10 May 2007

So full of hope, longing and much loving. Woemn should feel and think the way you described the 'What If ' in loving a person to keep him or her for life! Enjoyed it.10 it deserved! .

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