Saturday, October 5, 2019

What If? Comments

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What if we lose the track home
And I take the wrong long one,
What if you arrive after I am gone,
And nobody knows the path I took,
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Mbusya Wa Mbusya
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Jazib Kamalvi 05 October 2019

Write comment. Such a nice work, Mbusya. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kingsley Egbukole 05 October 2019

There will be a lot of What ifs, if we fail to do the right thing at the right time. Beautiful poem Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH. Kingsley Egbukole

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