Friday, December 12, 2014

What, If.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

What, if a singing bird has no choice,
But to quietly mute her own voice,
Who would notice, who would care?
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Khairul Ahsan
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Asma Zenjali 17 January 2015

what if.... i liked the title! and so your poem good... it attracts me, i keep reading it over and over good job!

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Sandra Feldman 25 December 2014

A singing bird, a brooding bard, a babbling brook, Give this poem, a most eternal look! An ever most touching poem, that cannot be forgotten. Only a very deep poetic heart could have written something so caringly and tenderly beautiful. A double 10

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Khairul Ahsan 21 April 2020

Thank you, Sandra Feldman, for your kind appreciation and generous rating of the poem. Much inspired by your appraisal of the poem.

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Patricia Grantham 13 December 2014

There are so many what ifs in life. We may not be able to answer them all but we can rely on the Creator of the universe to make things right. Inspiring.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 April 2020

'We may not be able to answer them all but we can rely on the Creator of the universe to make things right' - yes, truly so. Thanks for your inspiring words, @Patricia Grantham.

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Lorraine Colon 12 December 2014

What sad circumstances you mention here. It makes me want to volunteer to help the bird sing again, to encourage the bard to write again, and to guide the brook back to the parched soil. I don't think crying or praying for rain would accomplish much. What a thought provoking poem!

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