What if
I'm losing my mind?
Could it be worse
than what I can see?
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Genuine concerns coming from a humane heart! ! Concerns felt by every feeling mind! ! Love this poem Elena! !
A genuine concern over the earth's contamination & advising people for not to be mindless & ruthless. A noble thought in deed.
You certainly are not losing your mind when you have such concerns. Very relevant concerns and very well expressed. Nice write.
I appreciate your concerns. We human beings should love our mother nature as much as we love our biological mothers. A positive thought, a positive concern, a poem of positive passion.
Pain and joy are the two folds of life. When we look at the big social problems such as wars, loveless solution, our individual problems looks insignificant. At the same time life giver trees stand as an inspiration to life. I see beautiful emotion and flow of language here. It is totally a positive outlook to life and realities of the world: -)
You are a sane one in all this cruel insanity portrayed in your poem. You are a breath of fresh air in all the ugliness. One person - poem - at a time can change the world. Nature may sometimes hold the answer, when we sit and write we may be inspired to do or write something great that will make a difference in this world. Lovely poem, liked it a lot. RoseAnn