Friday, March 9, 2012

What If? Comments

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In a starless night, he sat outside on the wet grass staring at the sky. The moon shinning bright. Thoughts raced through his mind.

What if he didn't talk to her, would it of eased the pain?
What if she didn't reply, Would the love still remain?
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Broken heart emo
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 07 July 2012

on a dark desert highway cool wind in my hair, , , , , nice poem. but why do you use broken heart such your poetry name? its especial and strange though!

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James Barrs 09 March 2012

I too have a poem entitled What IF some of the same sentiments are expressed. I really like your poem. I think mine travels a longer span of time, i think yours investigates love more completely.

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