Thursday, December 3, 2015

What If? Comments

Rating: 5.0

What if there was no design,
No grand, eternal plan?
Nothing which to call divine
Except the feats of man.
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Brian Mayo
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Pamela Sinicrope 16 January 2016

This is a beautiful poem. I can't believe I missed it. I think I need to add you as one of my favorite poets so I get a notification when you publish a poem. I like the way the poem is presented gently with the What if motif....great triple entendre and wonderful message, atheist or not. We need to remember to respect and love this earth just for what it is. It is pretty amazing even without the layer of God and the concept of creation. Live for right now. Enjoy your drone!

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Brian Mayo 18 January 2016

Yep, live for right now... and right now I'm saying thanks. I'm glad you like my poem.

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Souren Mondal 03 December 2015

As Kelly said below, affirmative answers. A nicely written poem Brian. Thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 03 December 2015

As an atheist, the what ifs presented are answered in the affirmative.

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