Saturday, July 30, 2011

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If I stand in the pouring rain,
Will it wash away my pain?

If I swim in the green ocean,
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Amanda Braccia
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Tyrone Gayle 28 September 2014

My heart smiled while I read your poem. I admire your blunt approach in each line. It made the poem bold and strong.

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Amber S 09 August 2011

this is a really good poem its very touching and thank you for posting it :) -Amber

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Amanda Braccia

Amanda Braccia

staten island, new york.
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