Monday, May 10, 2010

What If.....? ? ? Comments

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What if god asks us to make a wish.....?
Then why don't we make a wish to
forget what is foe,
And why don’t we just let it go.
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Anita Trivedi
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 July 2010

‘Lets tell failure simple nope, Coz there is always a hope.’ ~ Ma’am excellent poetry will pump in calorie of self confidence in 'dense'…great write for youngs especially …enjoyed much Poet Anita…thanks sharing.. Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Nooruddeen Mm 24 May 2010

A poem with so many questions A verity one Good work Rgds Noor

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What if god ask us to make a wish.....? v nice one to prob mind.one ponders over issues but gets no where, ......nicelyput all....10 read mine..i miss...national sentiments

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Alfred Cawe 12 May 2010

I always like reading questioning poems.......They are not forcing any ideas, rather they give a chance 4 2nd thought......well done

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Nerisha Kemraj 11 May 2010

'Than why don't we make a wish to forget what is differentation, And why are we in such misconception.' Good questions here - a good poem to get one thinking :)

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Konstantin Filipov 10 May 2010

Love the optimism in your poem. Good job, thanks for sharing

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 May 2010

What if God ask us tomake a wish. nice Anita you begin with forgetting the evil done by the enemies. nice start.. forget falure and be positive in life. dreaming of the world as one.. nice ideas.. thank u for sharing. God bless you.

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