Have you ever just stopped
and stared at yourself?
You will find that there are
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Insightful analogy, young lady...Your employment of couplets works well....Stanzaic movement glides mellifluously...Solid Penning. FjR
So I ask you, would you change these mistakes? If yes, then why? What is wrong with the way you are? because we are taught to fix mistakes. Becca